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LX Commentary #8: Where Do Old Lovers Go?

Posted on July 4, 2021January 24, 2022 by LBDG

The song may be about going away, but ironically it helped pull the musical concept of the book together. It was also one of my favorite chapters to write. The lyrical breadcrumbs showed me connections to other Benji Hughes songs so clearly it made me start seeking them elsewhere. Benji & Jessica are at a…

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LX Chapter Commentary #7: Why Do These Parties Always End The Same Way?

Posted on June 12, 2021November 22, 2021 by LBDG

“We need to call the cops somebody killed the DJ!” is the lyric from A Love Extreme at the core of this chapter. Striking the right balance of goofy and sincere for L Extreme proved challenging. Benji & C’s comedic banter worked during the initial setup where Benji has no recollection of the party (“a…

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LX Chapter Commentary #6: Cornfields

Posted on June 6, 2021February 24, 2024 by LBDG

When I hear the word “cornfield” I immediately think of Quantum Leap‘s third season premiere episode “The Leap Home” from 1990 (or 1969 if we go by the leap date). Sam Beckett leaps into himself as a 16 year old, and running through the cornfield on his family’s farm features prominently in two different scenes….

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LX Chapter Commentary #5: Waiting For An Invitation

Posted on May 29, 2021November 22, 2021 by LBDG

Our lyrical raw materials: Cemetery –> Stars/Planets –> Band –> Apology Letter –> Unsent Invitations. Musically it’s a pretty song that takes things down a notch compared to the tunes that preceded it. And that’s the slalom course I tried to ski here. Other connections were also in play. The opening line “Ladies roll by…”…

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LX Chapter Commentary #4: Neighbor Down The Hall

Posted on May 19, 2021November 22, 2021 by LBDG

Many of the songs on A Love Extreme have phrases I adore so much they became non-negotiable blueprints for L Extreme chapters from the earliest drafts. Here the magic words were “jambox” and “Halloween.” Inserting a jambox as a recurring prop was relatively easy. Working Halloween into the book’s timeline proved more difficult… Why was…

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LX Chapter Commentary #3: You Stood Me Up

Posted on May 15, 2021November 22, 2021 by LBDG

A dream, a frame story, and a flashback walk into a novel based on lyrics from a double album by Benji Hughes who also stars as the protagonist. Kidding aside, the thrill of working on L Extreme was the kitchen-sink zaniness of the structure. As I began to identify the throughline of the plot, songs naturally…

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LX Chapter Commentary #2: Tight Tee Shirt

Posted on May 8, 2021November 22, 2021 by LBDG

Chapter 1 of L Extreme ends the dreamy non-dream with “and then I fall asleep,” so we naturally kick off the main action with Benji waking up. After making the switch to fiction, my original concept for the book was a set of loosely connected short stories. Take the same characters and settings and let them…

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LX Chapter Commentary #1: I Am You, You Are Me, We Are One

Posted on April 30, 2021November 22, 2021 by LBDG

As referenced previously, the first chapter I wrote for L Extreme was about the song “The Mummy” starring Benji, Count & Frank and referencing additional Benji Hughes songs from other albums. I did a few of those in random order and had a rough idea of how to loosely segue my way through the first…

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LX Origin Story, Part I

Posted on April 28, 2021November 22, 2021 by LBDG

Before I dive into chapter by chapter, song by song commentary for L Extreme I wanted to provide a little background on how this came to be. Let’s start at the beginning… July 2009: I purchased the special music issue of The Believer magazine at Skylight Books in LA. It was a total impulse purchase…

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New Novel: L Extreme

Posted on April 17, 2021March 18, 2024 by LBDG

It’s been awhile but we’re back with style… Announcing the new novel by JL Civi: L Extreme! Readers of this blog know I’ve been a huge fan of Benji Hughes for years. Somewhere along the line I decided to write a novel based on his album A Love Extreme. For a reason I can’t fully recall…

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