{"id":3083,"date":"2024-06-29T12:30:20","date_gmt":"2024-06-29T17:30:20","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/?p=3083"},"modified":"2024-06-29T12:30:20","modified_gmt":"2024-06-29T17:30:20","slug":"lbdg-commentary-6-a-trio-of-dueling-suitors","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/lbdg-commentary-6-a-trio-of-dueling-suitors\/","title":{"rendered":"LBDG Commentary 6: A Trio of Dueling Suitors"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Another non-song chapter title, invoking a musical trio while foreshadowing a few different dueling duos.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>We&#8217;re hitting <a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=Kxi4XkIVWLQ\">the crossroads<\/a> where the story loosely outlined in my head for years takes a hard turn in a different direction. In hindsight the breadcrumbs were there (they always are&#8230;), but this is the spot where <em>the lost adventures of Local Boy and the old man from TP between 1969-2002<\/em> morphed into <em>the narrator from <\/em>Timely Persuasion<em> isn&#8217;t the only time traveler manipulating Local Boy, and the stakes are 27 times higher than you think.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The big change in direction really happens with the unexpected return of an old character at the conclusion of this chapter which I&#8217;ll get into next time. For now, onto the tidbits&#8230;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Onto the Tidbits!<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>The original work in progress draft had a scene where Local Boy actually did meet his son at the bottom of the stairs after some trial and error of mistaken identity, but I came to realize teasing an appearance of his son was more compelling while also helping to keep this book standalone(ish).<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>The Eagles have always held a special anachronistic place in Local Boy&#8217;s heart. His lawn mowing showmanship stunt in 1969 was inspired by &#8220;Take It Easy&#8221; (<a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=NANKBajAaek\">written by Jackson Brown<\/a>&#8211;respect the greats!) and here he conjures 1974&#8217;s &#8220;Already Gone&#8221; (by <a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=uDndk5cDIcA\">Jack Tempchin<\/a> &amp; Robb Strandlund) out of the ether at the end of a sentence.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>When the son was present in this scene, he fed Local Boy lines while interrogating the Nelsons on where their songs came from. Here LB is showing his street-smart level of intuition, which is stronger than the book smarts he repeatedly reminds us he doesn&#8217;t have in a self-deprecating way.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>I should really keep a list of every actual and possible Local Boy album title, so might as well do that here. TP1 had <em>Done Good, Live at the Barnstormer, Coverville, <\/em>and <em>Quits.<\/em> In <em>Done Gone<\/em> he brainstorms <em>Allowed Aloud <\/em>and <em>In Cahoots<\/em>. If his career took off I reckon he&#8217;d eventually have to call a record <em>Dangerous Folk Rock Appeal<\/em> too.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>&#8220;A shrug away from an accident and a slush away from a snow cone machine&#8221; is a line I love and a few people in my writing group also highlighted. I&#8217;m sure it had some level of deeper meaning when I wrote it, but I have zero recollection of what it actually meant. (Edit: Cold shoulder, duh!)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Strange proof there\u2019s no such thing as an original idea anymore: <a href=\"https:\/\/www.google.com\/search?q=%22doe+in+a+spotlight%22\">Googled \u201cdoe in a spotlight\u201d<\/a> on a whim and found I\u2019m the 6th person to turn that phrase, the most interesting being <a href=\"http:\/\/asitecalledfred.com\/2021\/07\/05\/richard-donner-ken-plume-interviews\/\">Richard Donner using it<\/a> to describe a pre-<em>Superman<\/em> Margot Kidder.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><em>\u201cStop stallin\u2019 and start singin\u2019\u201d<\/em> foreshadows a future (and past) <a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=Z_-JapMQUPQ\">stolen song<\/a>.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Playing the upright bass as if it was a guitar was a random idea I had riffing on a way to have Local Boy\u2019s technique pay tribute to <a href=\"https:\/\/www.reddit.com\/r\/BassGuitar\/comments\/10c5yl0\/does_anybody_know_the_story_of_why_mark_sandman\/\">Mark Sandman from Morphine<\/a>. Then I found this video:<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=lGm4yTUAgWE\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"640\" height=\"318\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/06\/image.png?resize=640%2C318&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-3106\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/06\/image.png?resize=1024%2C509&amp;ssl=1 1024w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/06\/image.png?resize=300%2C149&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/06\/image.png?resize=768%2C382&amp;ssl=1 768w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/06\/image.png?resize=1536%2C764&amp;ssl=1 1536w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/06\/image.png?resize=850%2C423&amp;ssl=1 850w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/06\/image.png?w=1600&amp;ssl=1 1600w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/06\/image.png?w=1280&amp;ssl=1 1280w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 640px) 100vw, 640px\" \/><\/a><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=lGm4yTUAgWE\"><em>Shredding!<\/em><\/a><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Having the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=DYzY7-V5vxY\">Nelson&#8217;s cover Nilsson<\/a> felt fitting. Agonizing over whether you can play &#8220;One&#8221; &amp; &#8220;Won One&#8221; back to back was a real life internal debate that made its way into the story.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u201cWon One\u201d is 3 minutes &amp; 11 seconds in the recorded demo version, so burning 3 or 4 minutes is factually accurate. There\u2019s a lot more about \u201cWon One\u201d to come in these commentary posts.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><em>Won and One and Won is three <\/em>is a message from a future self foreshadowing the ending and a few other things to come.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>The mechanics of what\u2019s happening on stage with seen &amp; unseen presences is intentionally vague at this point, but will eventually have enough info to piece it together even if it isn\u2019t outright explained. Hint: we learned about two types of time travel in TP1 (in head &amp; full body), and will learn about two more in this sequel.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u201cIt\u2019s always about a girl\u201d invokes both Nirvana &amp; The Mr. T Experience, the latter of which often introduces multiple songs per night as <a href=\"http:\/\/teenagedogsintrouble.blogspot.com\/2018\/08\/day-5-this-is-song-about-girl-mr-t.html\">\u201cthis is a song about a girl!\u201d<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\"><a href=\"https:\/\/books2read.com\/b\/lbdg\">Check out <em>Local Boy Done Gone<\/em><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Another non-song chapter title, invoking a musical trio while foreshadowing a few different dueling duos. We&#8217;re hitting the crossroads where the story loosely outlined in my head for years takes a hard turn in a different direction. In hindsight the breadcrumbs were there (they always are&#8230;), but this is the spot where the lost adventures&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[11],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-3083","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-behind-the-scenes"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p3pfx3-NJ","jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":3435,"url":"https:\/\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/lbdg-commentary-29-lyndon-b-goode\/","url_meta":{"origin":3083,"position":0},"title":"LBDG Commentary 29: Lyndon B. 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