{"id":2240,"date":"2021-07-22T23:06:12","date_gmt":"2021-07-23T04:06:12","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/?p=2240"},"modified":"2022-07-06T22:40:12","modified_gmt":"2022-07-07T03:40:12","slug":"lx-commentary-10-all-youve-got-to-do-is-fall-in-love","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/lx-commentary-10-all-youve-got-to-do-is-fall-in-love\/","title":{"rendered":"LX Commentary #10: All You&#8217;ve Got To Do Is Fall In Love"},"content":{"rendered":"\r\n<p>Upon deciding to run with this fairytale interlude for the rest of side B, my storytelling goal became connecting the dots from Benji &amp; Jessica to Benji &amp; L while moving things towards a confrontation in &#8220;The Tower&#8221;\u2014whatever that might turn out to be. So easy to do, right? \ud83d\ude42<br \/><br \/>My favorite part of this chapter was a happy accident. Originally I recycled the shopping list from &#8220;Where Do Old Lovers Go?&#8221; here, showing the grocery store scene from the internal point of view. Somewhere along the line I picked up the habit of listening to each chapter&#8217;s song on repeat as I wrote\/rewrote, and one day the drawn out way Benji Hughes sings the opening line here sounded like a rebus.<br \/><br \/>Wouldn&#8217;t it be sweet, if you could be in love with me?<br \/><br \/>Wood&#8230;Ant..IT..Bee..Sweet<br \/><br \/>Aside from the pronoun in the middle, each one had an easy image. And so did IT if I invoked the iconic Stephen King title.<\/p>\r\n<figure id=\"attachment_2614\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-2614\" style=\"width: 322px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-2614 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/Screen-Shot-2021-11-30-at-9.58.58-PM.png?resize=322%2C146&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" width=\"322\" height=\"146\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/Screen-Shot-2021-11-30-at-9.58.58-PM.png?w=322&amp;ssl=1 322w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/Screen-Shot-2021-11-30-at-9.58.58-PM.png?resize=300%2C136&amp;ssl=1 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 322px) 100vw, 322px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-2614\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Wouldn&#8217;t it be sweet, if you could be in love with me? Wood Ant IT Bee Sweet, \u00a0F Ewe Cod Beer Inbox ? Wheat Mirror<\/figcaption><\/figure>\r\n<p>(I suppose a middle finger could replace the Fahrenheit lamb, but we&#8217;ll keep this G rated in accordance with the old &#8220;contains no explicit language&#8221; label that once appeared on an <a href=\"http:\/\/web.archive.org\/web\/20171201210404\/http:\/\/benjihughesstore.bigcartel.com\/product\/lililil\">old version<\/a> of the Benji Hughes <a href=\"http:\/\/web.archive.org\/web\/20150206005420\/http:\/\/benjihughesstore.bigcartel.com\/products\">store website<\/a>.)<\/p>\r\n<p>Other tidbits:<\/p>\r\n<figure id=\"attachment_2279\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-2279\" style=\"width: 158px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/?attachment_id=2279\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-2279 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Handwritten-Shopping-List.png?resize=158%2C300&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" width=\"158\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Handwritten-Shopping-List.png?resize=158%2C300&amp;ssl=1 158w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Handwritten-Shopping-List.png?resize=210%2C400&amp;ssl=1 210w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Handwritten-Shopping-List.png?w=332&amp;ssl=1 332w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 158px) 100vw, 158px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-2279\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Kinda looks like a sword&#8230;<\/figcaption><\/figure>\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Easter egg in the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.amazon.com\/dp\/1733042121\/\">paperback edition<\/a>: The list is written in a font based on Benji&#8217;s handwriting. The first few parentheticals use my wife&#8217;s handwriting to represent Jessica adding clarifying comments. In real life my wife would never add extra detail to a shopping list (she can make the grocery store a scavenger hunt&#8230;), but I can make fun of her for it here \ud83d\ude42<\/li>\r\n<li>If (magazine) references a <a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/If_(magazine)\">sci-fi mag from the 50s <\/a>where this Heartman &amp; Songstress section would fit right in. (There&#8217;s also an <a href=\"https:\/\/shop.if.com.au\">Australian film magazine<\/a>, invoking the movie references.)<\/li>\r\n<li>&#8220;Eyes like billboards&#8221; comes from Benji&#8217;s unreleased song &#8220;Masters in China&#8221; <a href=\"https:\/\/open.spotify.com\/track\/5ziKcg4AeEwCt4rYZd83rT?si=5df14e07224c4778\">covered by Priscilla Ahn<\/a>. (Ditto &#8220;red wine saliva&#8221; a little bit later.)<\/li>\r\n<li>&#8220;Your sweet, sweet kiss. Like an ice cold drink of cherry wine.&#8221; references the song <a href=\"https:\/\/open.spotify.com\/track\/1UBCBAvrbX1JX5CjbV3t1X?si=f017f36b852642fa\">&#8220;Magic Summertime&#8221; by Eleni Mandell<\/a>, covered by Benji on\u00a0<em><a href=\"https:\/\/open.spotify.com\/track\/40xq1hyai2CpW64eIyscRc?si=567db33712744824\">Songs in the Key of Animals<\/a>.\u00a0<\/em>(The original also has a line &#8220;just like a fairytale when we first met&#8221; that isn&#8217;t in the cover version, but invokes an appropriate mood here.)<\/li>\r\n<li>&#8220;Adequate portion of potion&#8221; isn&#8217;t from a song, but it&#8217;s one of my favorite phrasings.<\/li>\r\n<li>At one show during his month-long Largo residency in 2010, Benji tried to\r\n<figure id=\"attachment_2276\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-2276\" style=\"width: 200px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-2276\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?resize=200%2C300&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" width=\"200\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?resize=200%2C300&amp;ssl=1 200w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?resize=683%2C1024&amp;ssl=1 683w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?resize=768%2C1152&amp;ssl=1 768w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?resize=1024%2C1536&amp;ssl=1 1024w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?resize=1365%2C2048&amp;ssl=1 1365w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?resize=533%2C800&amp;ssl=1 533w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?resize=267%2C400&amp;ssl=1 267w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?w=1800&amp;ssl=1 1800w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/LX-Cover-PNG.png?w=1280&amp;ssl=1 1280w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 200px) 100vw, 200px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-2276\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Mock up featuring animated &#8220;Heartman&#8221; Benji from the music video over the outer space <em>LILILIL<\/em> album cover.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\r\nhave his band play &#8220;All You&#8217;ve Got To Do Is Fall in Love&#8221; and &#8220;So Much Better&#8221; simultaneously with him singing lead on the latter and <a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=0aRd6-Pzd70\">Jackson Browne on the former<\/a>. It was as weird and wild as you&#8217;d imagine\u2014and almost worked in the places where the word LOVE (of course) overlapped. More on that later, but I bring it up here since this made me treat these two chapters\/songs as companion pieces. Hence the mysterious foreshadowing at the end.<\/li>\r\n<li>The animated video for this song by Jon Williams and Paul Friedrich influenced the way I imagined Heartman Benji while writing this section\u2014and was also the first concept I mocked up for the book cover. You can watch that video below (My favorite part is the piano playing fish!) plus a bonus cover version by Ben Cahn.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">Check out <a href=\"https:\/\/books2read.com\/b\/lx\"><em>L Extreme<\/em><\/a><\/p>\r\n<p><div class=\"jetpack-video-wrapper\"><span class=\"embed-youtube\" style=\"text-align:center; display: block;\"><iframe loading=\"lazy\" class=\"youtube-player\" width=\"640\" height=\"360\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/dwOTYLmHBeA?version=3&#038;rel=1&#038;showsearch=0&#038;showinfo=1&#038;iv_load_policy=1&#038;fs=1&#038;hl=en-US&#038;autohide=2&#038;wmode=transparent\" allowfullscreen=\"true\" style=\"border:0;\" sandbox=\"allow-scripts allow-same-origin allow-popups allow-presentation allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox\"><\/iframe><\/span><\/div><\/p>\r\n<p><div class=\"jetpack-video-wrapper\"><span class=\"embed-youtube\" style=\"text-align:center; display: block;\"><iframe loading=\"lazy\" class=\"youtube-player\" width=\"640\" height=\"360\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/TX89GKvoC1c?version=3&#038;rel=1&#038;showsearch=0&#038;showinfo=1&#038;iv_load_policy=1&#038;fs=1&#038;hl=en-US&#038;autohide=2&#038;wmode=transparent\" allowfullscreen=\"true\" style=\"border:0;\" sandbox=\"allow-scripts allow-same-origin allow-popups allow-presentation allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox\"><\/iframe><\/span><\/div><\/p>\r\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Upon deciding to run with this fairytale interlude for the rest of side B, my storytelling goal became connecting the dots from Benji &amp; Jessica to Benji &amp; L while moving things towards a confrontation in &#8220;The Tower&#8221;\u2014whatever that might turn out to be. So easy to do, right? \ud83d\ude42 My favorite part of this&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[11],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-2240","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-behind-the-scenes"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p3pfx3-A8","jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":2083,"url":"https:\/\/blog.timelypersuasion.com\/blog\/new-novel-l-extreme\/","url_meta":{"origin":2240,"position":0},"title":"New Novel: L Extreme","author":"LBDG","date":"April 17, 2021","format":false,"excerpt":"It's been awhile but we're back with style... 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